A very good story, @agmoore.I find very suggestive the adaptation you made of the proposal of @owasco. Although many details escape me because of my limitations in English, I could notice an interesting handling of the suspense, through the regulation of the information offered by the main character. Along with that, what literary theory calls "places of indetermination", that is, ambiguous aspects, for the reader to fill in. I think I see some real, historical references in the cases of these colonies that, under seduction, kidnap young people and keep them in a system of slavery that is overlapped (I don't know if I'm wrong in my interpretation); or also family homes, as the latest cases revealed show. Thank you and greetings. ### ***

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