![100Funded2.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmXNEcWGJiTctr69SCZqZrD1CjN1rtFGbajxic7GDQA8om/100Funded2.jpg) Well, it was rather close, but the campaign for *POLIS: The Trial of Socrates* was a success on Kickstarter! A number of people on Steemit helped me get there, so thanks so much for the support. The art progresses - Daniel has now delivered the first full twenty pages of the book. I'll get some updates going on those soon (been crazy, and it's been hard to update steemit lately). In the meantime, I'm wondering if I can get your opinion? I've been looking at the lettering that I've done, and I figure it can use some improvement. I've tested out a couple fonts, and also massaged some of the balloon and word stacking. Take a look below - does one version stand out as better than the other two? ## Original ![Socrates_016_Wild_test.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmcSuDgqAe85kySQNzom2VJ9ku9GS1ytuHM6St97pHXYds/Socrates_016_Wild_test.jpg) ## Test #1 ![Socrates_016_Anim_test.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmWcKURKmWT7nKVtWc8dDE6B71gynbhTCSaQt8jSeuN3w4/Socrates_016_Anim_test.jpg) ## Test #2 ![Socrates_016_Andam_test.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmbjmqByeygkTFAP6zfNj7cCK3RJ1jiiZ2GdsewgXRFTZc/Socrates_016_Andam_test.jpg) ## Test #3 ![Socrates_016_BackIssue_test.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmXGaT7gf8a3DuUhQQuFyN64EvmEzDLEvxbqMV1PvdJAZk/Socrates_016_BackIssue_test.jpg) Art by [Daniel Becker](http://invisible-ink-studio.com/work/). Previous colored pages: [Page 14-15](https://steemit.com/comics/@jpgaltmiller/polis-the-trial-of-socrates-graphic-novel-update-first-colored-page) | [Page 16](https://steemit.com/comics/@jpgaltmiller/polis-the-trial-of-socrates-graphic-novel-update-page-16-colored) | [Page 17](https://steemit.com/comics/@jpgaltmiller/polis-the-trial-of-socrates-graphic-novel-update-page-17-colored) | [Page 18](https://steemit.com/comics/@jpgaltmiller/polis-the-trial-of-socrates-graphic-novel-update-page-17-colored) | [Page 19](https://steemit.com/comics/@jpgaltmiller/polis-the-trial-of-socrates-graphic-novel-update-page-19-colored) --- Thanks for your support and any feedback! Your upvote is definitely appreciated. I hope you'll stick around and watch it all come together. https://steemitimages.com/DQmZVWnbnWk9stLsFq9AgZ99iBTys56iom7izwcyJkpycfk/HeaderImage2.jpg Like what you see? Follow to watch history come to life! [**@jpgaltmiller**](https://steemit.com/@jpgaltmiller) **UP-VOTE -- RESTEEM -- FOLLOW**